No
01 Jalan Hidayah 01,
Kampung
Muhibbah,
35600
Sungkai,
Perak.
19
January 2015.
The
Manager,
Izzly
Design and Print,
No
7 Jalan Stesen,
35900
Tanjung Malim,
Perak.
Dear
Sir/Madam.
APPLICATION FOR THE POST OF DESIGN
TSHIRT AND PRINTING TSHIRT.
I
want to apply for a position as a tshirt design and printing images text on
tshirt.
I have work experience in the field of design
clothes when I graduated.
I am willing to be called for interview at any
time in your office. I hope the master will consider my application.
Yours Faithfully,
intan
(INTAN
ZULAIHA BT AHMAD)
application to short...
ReplyDeletePlease dont make a pragrafth.. this not the essay ok this is resume
ReplyDeleteokay kuale :)
DeleteThe title should not be underline since you have written it in upper case
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ReplyDeleteplease do not use the line if you have bold....
ReplyDeleteTitle: no need for underline if it's bold. Check for structure error.
ReplyDeleteContent: Too short. Please add more points and skills related to the field of the job you are applying.
Closure: your are hoping them to call you not whether willing to or not. Please use a more appropriate sentence.
Signature: no need for your name to be in brackets.
Alignment: Space between paragraphs and justify.
Fonts: Remember to use Arial 12.
Overview: Please take this seriously. Don't do it halfheartedly.
Just want to say tat your letter is to simple
ReplyDeleteno underline to title
ReplyDeletethe title and the salutation need to space 1.5
ReplyDeleteToo short and need to space between the title and the greetings ..
ReplyDeleteToo short and need to space between the title and the greetings ..
ReplyDeleteyour letter too short and simple, your salutation need space from title, and don't underline
ReplyDeleteIntan, please do not put pull stop in your date. Do not underline the subject line since it is written in upper case. You also need to elaborate on skills for the position applied. Lastly, under closing please mention that you have attached your resume together with the letter. Good luck!
ReplyDeletedo not underline the subjects since it is written in upper case. have a nice day :)
ReplyDeleteassalamualaikum intan, look like your letter to short for me. Make sure dont do this mistaken when appyling your job okay.. Keep going buddy :)
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